It seems a slightly missed mark. To be conceptually correct - the person of Dorian Gray is supposed to age/deteriorate/get hideous.... not just the surface - the canvas!
narangset
Sorry - executed well, but conceptually it misses the mark. The surface doesn’t deteriorate, the image of the man’s feature do.
Dania
Nice poster but it needs a little more polish. He looks unretouched and I feel as though the hair masking needs some work, I can see dark halos, could also help to paint in some hairs. He needs to be rotated about 3% counter clockwise. Overall nice image and he still looks hot.